I'm lucky, too, that I was able to find a mass-market paperback version of the book in English, since that isn't scheduled to come out until October. (Since I move a lot, I refuse to buy bulky, heavy hardcovers) Lots of people have complained about both this book and A Feast for Crows, but I have to say, I love them nearly as much as the earlier books. The writing grips me just as strongly and sweeps me away into a world that fits my sense of adventure perfectly.
I do have some minor quibbles, though not about how slowly Martin
produces his books--as far as I'm concerned, he should take the time he needs
in order to get them right. My main quibble is that Daenerys Targaryen is
simply too passive, naive, and almost stupid in her chapters. I know she is
very young still, but she has been through so much that she should have grown
up a bit and gained some wisdom...or at least be able to listen to some of the
wisdom of people like Ser Barristan Selmy. Instead she sits around moaning and
doing almost nothing except stupid things like agreeing to marry someone very
wrong for her. I haven't yet read far enough to see how badly that turns out,
but I don't have to in order to know that it will turn badly very quickly, and
she should have known it would. Her naivete regarding the slave
trade and slave cities is just astounding--you can't make such sweeping changes
without shaking up the world and turning almost everyone against you.
The last thing I wanted to mention was that I saw a riddle that Martin threw in to one of Dany's chapters, and it made me guess that the two dragon riders other than Dany will most likely be Tyrion and the 'Frog' prince of Dorne who has just arrived in her city at the point where I am reading. Of course, it could be another Dornish person or another Lannister, but that seems doubtful. Anyone else think this when reading the book?